Dream Deep

Beautiful, Gummy, as could be expected. ^_~ You always manage to capture such beautiful images and emotions in your poetry - I really have nothing derogatory to say. The wording ...

Selected Essays by GK Chesterton. ... Some of them brilliant, some of them laughably ridiculous - wonderful combination of musings. Thanks so much, Imp, for suggesting him. ^_^

I loved it, Clau. ^_~ I wouldn't be able to write humor when in my best frame of mind, let alone in the middle of anxious worry. ;) I liked ...

This is Pros's but he won't post it - ergo, I am forced to embarass him. :razz: 'Well, he isn't exactly peach pie'. (Where did that come from?)

Very cute. ^_^ ... though I'm beginning to think your enthusiasm for pigs is bordering on unhealthy... XD

I would try it both ways, Shafter. Write a concluding chapter where he dies - then turn around and write one where he lives. Let there be no restrictions and ...

Try reversing it - the classic misunderstanding. ^_~ Character A gets the impression/is told by an unreliable source that Character B did something less than commendable. Ergo, they grow apart ...

I like it. ^_^ French - foreign language titesl always have the advantage, as far as getting someone's attention, I think. And the 'Marche' gives it something of a martial ...

It depends what I'm working on, really. Or more specifically, it depends if it's mundane. - Shan Tefur -- What is your street address?

Not that long. I mean, how long does it take to shower and get dressed? Five minutes maybe... ten at the most. - Shan Tefur Oh, hours. I have to ...

Intriguing. One word and a short word at that, easy on the less than furious pace of my mind at the moment. ^_^ Plus it has a very nice sound, ...

The people I know call me Shan, imaginatively. Not that I would want a nickname, too bloody confusing. - Shan Tefur Another thing I've noticed about women - they love ...

Beautiful - I'd want to read more. It strikes me as a generally light piece, easy to read and hopeful, with a nice tone. For some reason, the first image ...

Too hard, when you think about it. There's too much tragic stupidity in everyday life - keeps from living the life you want to live, after all. - Shan Tefur ...

Though, as you say, the single word title is a nice technique, this title seems a bit awkward. It makes you expect a heavy piece of writing, something you'd pick ...